Okay wow. My heart. This is so cute and so beautifully dawn. I just love the way they're looking at each other all cute and loving. Thank you, as always!
There aren't words for the awesome and happy of this page!!!!! The cute...it burns!!! <G> I'm gonna go stare at it for a while longer because it reminds me of when I first fell in love as a teen!
words honestly cant express how this page made me feel,,, i opened it up and i immediately just...softened. you conveyed an atmosphere so well this whole last few pages but something about this one specifically i just, gosh. my heart clenched.
Daniel's expression give me live. Seriously, he's not even surprised that Louis didn't kissed him, you know... that smile... He just knows Louis so well, this is simply so beautiful and romantic :')) also I'm really glad they didn't kissed now, i swear, this is so much more real and cute (btw i may semm new here, but i just moved from tapas XD) (btw² i'm sorry if my english is bad ;-;)
i just remembered about this after the first version of chapter one (probably two years ago haha) and OMG i never thought i could love Daniel even more but i do. he is such a beautiful, beautiful soul.
initially, i shared the sentiments of the other characters in regards to the fear of Daniel being hurt, but i believe that Daniel would be strong enough to manage the pain, as proven so many times. Lois, however, would probably be wallowed in self-hatred and pity and i actually really sympathize him. i can't wait for more! ((also really love the dark moments where anxiety hits Lois, i don't have anxiety, but it's very relatable ))
I'm crying... This seems like he's still hesitant to accept it, but is just like, dammit I like him. >///< I don't know how to feel. Next page, please let me feel better. xD
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(ps: i replied to last page's comments on the last page<3 thanks guys for reading :)