A coming of age comic about two dorks falling in love

Chapter 08 - 21

GO BACK TO PAGE 256 !!!!! FIRST: I am real sorry about this page. I have no idea how to fix the layout so it fits the image, but I hope it's not too distracting :/ If it's really that much of a problem, just drag the image up to the toolbar to view the image.

SECOND: Yeah I dunno, this update was probably weird LOOL I hope it read/flowed okay and wasn't disappointing D: Somehow I always get nervous when new things are revealed about the characters, and I'm kinda ticked at myself for not having mentioned "Lauren" sooner; but upon thinking more on it, I'm not sure there has been an appropriate moment to bring her up until perhaps now (but maybe I'm wrong). :/ She's a different girlfriend than the one we learned about last chapter, so Louis has had two previous relationships. But FORGETTING HER FOR A SECOND...then there's this page. Hope it's clear what's going on?? u__u

But omg the update aside, thank you all for the nice congratulations last week<33 It made my heart happy ;w; !!!!

User's Comments:

Reply Cakenstein, May 4th, 2014, 6:39 pm

Ohhhhh...i understand now XD

Reply UglyEpiphany, May 4th, 2014, 6:39 pm

Hello~! My first time commenting here >.> but anyway, these pages are lovely and they do flow very nice, their pace fitting the mood. The Lauren bit was a bit confusing as you had said though(for me, personally. I can't speak for others). I had at first thought she had misjudged where Louis was looking and just figured "Oh, maybe it was her because of the past" or such, but I started to understand with the pages after it.

Also, I love this page so much! <3 It's very similar to something I'm going through, and the words used can really match with a lot of my own feelings :D

Reply kittychick, May 4th, 2014, 7:30 pm

So Good... You have a talent for exposition. I didn't have a problem following the story at all; in fact, I appreciated the creative way you let us know about Lauren, and how you are letting us know that Louis is falling hard for Daniel; it will be interesting to see how he resolves his feelings in relation to Daniel and his other friends.

Reply Gabriel Grey, May 5th, 2014, 1:20 am

Yeah figuring that Lauren was just an example for a bad relationship it's okay you didn't bring her up earlier, and I really liked the layout :) The way she describes his feelings for the guy's whose name I forgot and they kinda match with what Louis feels for Daniel.

Reply MechaMax, May 5th, 2014, 2:03 am

This page is lovely! (Daniel looks really cute...) also I love this kind of conversation. Not that I've felt it in a long time, but I can so relate to the way that you start thinking about a certain person even though you're talking about something or someone else. It's not always easy to say if you like that person or if you're just interested in them... but this page does a good job conveying that. I don't think I've said this but you're really good at comic layouts, ghost! <3

Reply NeuroticSoulGobbler, May 13th, 2014, 11:18 am

I almost expect Louis to drop his book and put his hands on his face before screaming out of horror. I love your characters so much. :) And all the high school angst.

Reply +bird+ (Guest), May 20th, 2014, 3:38 am

This update was not at all disappointing! I love finding things out about the characters, even when it's things I don't expect, because it's very much like learning about actual people. And I can usually relate (like in this situation, aaaaaaaah Louis...!). And let's be honest, aren't we all a little narcissistic and looking for a bit of ourselves in these characters?

Wah wah I wish 'em all the best. *lays down and cries*

Reply Truefan108, February 24th, 2018, 9:47 pm

Oh no Shelly and Louis are in the same boat

Reply Kyntal, March 25th, 2018, 1:44 am

I like this page

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